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- 火把
2018-07-03 21:26(15条回复)Come on, author.I know a lot of novels. This novel is the first to use the software to see my first novel. The novel writing is good but you update a little slow. Hope the author can speed up the point. The author also can add some more sister adult ver. Also want to see Lin hanyun jealous black. The author can also add some "goddess". Somewhere behind can also add a little blood. The strength of character to strengthen or lead to desperately. Novel written by the author is good author gas greatly.
- 女神攻略系统8.9
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封子羽 本书作者
18-07-05 01:27回复大哥，我看不懂
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霜月儿 火把
18-07-05 09:47回复我看了很多小说懂。这本小说是我第一个用这个软件看的第一本小说。这本小说写的不错不过作者你更新速度有点慢。希望作者可以加快点速度。作者也可以多加点妹子的修罗场。也想看见林涵韵吃醋的黑化样子。作者也可以加点“女神”。到后面也可以加一点热血的地方。主角的实力也要加强一点不然主角又要拼命
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霜月儿 火把
18-07-05 10:46回复冰山美人黑化的样子
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wonkey 火把
18-07-24 23:17回复全是中式英语的表达，醉了......
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干将莫邪秀 火种
18-08-02 23:40回复jealous black，好精彩的文笔啊老哥
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霜月儿 火把
18-08-03 00:19回复@干将莫邪秀 怎么了？
