作者能写出自己追自己的书也是人才了,第一次看到这样的书,期待,就是有一些段落不太好,望改进!!还是第一人称视角,我都怀疑你是不是在写自己????哈哈哈哈😄(评论字书怎么要大于140字呢)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦啦
[em:sfgirl:021]谢谢,正在修改!!![em:sfgirl:030]